Question

【题目】假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Bob,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，语言简练，句子衔接紧密，结构合理，同时文中使用高级句子。I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.宾语从句用在句中；Shall we go on Saturday morning?问句在此起承上启下的作用；We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. so that引导的目的状语从句巧妙至极；If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.条件状语从句运用恰当；If not, let me know what time suits you best. If not,省略句的使用简介、经典。