Question

假如你是李华，请给你的美国笔友JIm写一封e-mail，介绍你的英语老师Mr.Wang

要点：1.他40岁，中等个头；

2.性格外向，与学生相处得很好；

3.他的英语口语很流利，课后常帮我们学英语；

4.不抽烟，非常喜欢运动，擅长打篮球  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

Hi.How is everything going with you lately? I am writing to tell you something about my English teache Mr.Wang. Mr.Wang is forty years old. He is neither tall nor short. He is outgoing and gets on well with us students. His spoken English is very good(He can speak English fluently). He often helps us with our English after class. He likes sports and is good at playing basketball. He doesn't smoke. We all love him.

Best wishes to you

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文是以书信的方式介绍一个人。应是与朋友写信，故开头开先写几句问候语，然后切入文章主题，介绍老师。文本必须覆盖所有要点，自己还可以适当增加要点。时态均采用一般现在时。描述完他的情况后，可适当增加我对他的评价。 文章结尾也应注意书信的格式。