Question

假设你叫李华，是一名高中生。你的好友王力最近发来电子邮件，他说由于他的父母不允许他上网，希望他把时间都用在学习上，所以他感到非常苦恼。请根据下面的写作提示，给王力回一封信。

表示理解和同情；

提出建议；

祝愿他心情好起来。

注意：1．词数120左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Wang Li,

I know from your letter that you are upset recently _____________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Li,

I know from your letter that you are upset recently because your parents don’t permit you to surf the Internet and hope you spend all the time on study．I understand how you are feeling now, so I’m writing to offer you some advice．

It is really boring to do our homework all day without having a rest．I know you enjoy surfing the Internet and chatting online．But right now, we are students．With so much homework to do, if we spend too much time on other things, we can’t focus on our lessons．I hope you have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents, which can help you understand each other．Maybe they allow you to surf the Internet once in a while．I think it is important to develop a pleasant relationship with our parents whatever may happen．

I wish you to have a good mood and I am looking forward to your early reply．

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，假设你是一名高中生。你的好友王力最近发来电子邮件，他说由于他的父母不允许他上网，希望他把时间都用在学习上，所以他感到非常苦恼。请根据写作提示，给王力回一封信。表示理解和同情；提出建议；祝愿他心情好起来。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。词数120左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：It形式主语、With so much homework to do 引导的非谓语，which引导的定语从句、once in a while等都很不错。

考点：电子邮件类作文。