Question

【题目】假定你是李华, 进入高中已近一个学期, 感悟颇多。请你写一封信给你的美国笔友John, 向他介绍你的学习生活情况。内容包括:

1. 学校环境;

2. 人际交往;

3. 学习生活。

注意:

1. 词数100词左右;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

Dear John,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

How is everything going? It’s been almost a term since I entered Senior High School. I’ve got so much to share with you.

Located in the center of our city, our school is a key school with a history of 70 years. Equipped with all kinds of facilities, our school is beautiful as well as modern. What attracts me most is the library, where I can get access to various resources. I’ve made quite a few friends here. In class, we’re encouraged to share our opinions with group members and to solve problems by ourselves. I do enjoy it.

How about your school life? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信。进入高中已近一个学期, 感悟颇多。请你写一封信给你的美国笔友John, 向他介绍你的学习生活情况。内容包括:学校环境；人际交往；学习生活。认真阅读前面的提示，根据所给要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封书信，格式正确，结构严谨，语句精炼，文章布局合理，文中使用高级词汇和句子。It’s been almost a term since I entered Senior High School句中使用固定句式；Located in the center of our city, our school is a key school with a history of 70 years.过去分词做伴随状态；Equipped with all kinds of facilities, our school is beautiful as well as modern.过去分词做原因状语；What attracts me most is the library, where I can get access to various resources.句中what引导的主语从句和where引导的定语从句完美结合；I do enjoy it.强调谓语使用巧妙。