Question

5．当前，餐桌上的浪费已成为严重的社会问题．假如你是某校学生会主席李华，请你根据下列图片中的内容，在校园网的英语论坛上发表一篇倡议书．其内容如下：
1．简述目前浪费粮食的现状．
2．简述世界粮食短缺问题．
3．号召大家响应"光盘行动"，爱惜节约来之不易的粮食，并提出建议．
世界每6秒有一个儿童饿死，2亿儿童营养不良，300万死于饥饿．我国每年浪费500亿公斤，倒掉2亿人的口粮．我光盘，我光荣，珍惜粮食．剩饭打包，点菜不多点．赶快加入光盘一族
参考词汇：光盘行动（the clear-your-plate campaign）
注意：要求：
1．短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；
2．短文的词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）；
3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；
4．书写须清晰、工整．
Dear schoolmates，
   Wasting food on dining tables has become a serious social problem．____________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Chairman of the Student Union
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇倡议书，讨论食物浪费的现象．属于应用文写作，解题时要注意格式和口语化特征．用第一人称和现在时态为主．内容要点要全，包括现状，出现的问题和建议．
重要短语和句型：
waste：浪费
food shortages：食品短缺
environmental protection：环境保护
build a harmonious world：建立和谐世界
高分句型一：
Not only things and money are wasted，but also natural resources are abused as well．
不但浪费钱物，而且滥用自然资源．
not only…but also…并列连词，表示"不但…而且…"．
高分句型二：
Besides，faced with the rising energy prices，people have turned to the production of biofuels，which has worsened the severe situation．
此外，面对不断增长的能源价格，人们已经开始寻求生物燃料，这进一步恶化了现状．
本句过去分词faced with the rising energy prices作时间状语；which引导非限制性定语从句修饰前面整个句子内容．
高分句型三：
Of course，to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage．
为了建立和谐世界，发达国家要承担起帮助贫穷国家度过食品短缺的危机的责任．
不定式to build a harmonious world the developed countries 作主语．

解答 Mankind is wasting things everywhere and everyday．Whenever we go，we can see that paper，bottles and cans are thrown away； food is wasted just because of poor taste； clothes are discarded simply due to their old fashion．（分析现状一）Not only things and money are wasted，but also natural resources are abused as well．【高分句型一】Trees are cut down merely for fuel；wild animals are killed simply for meat；oil and coal are exploited in a bad way．（分析现状二）Now I'll tell you something about our research project The World Food Crisis on behalf of our group．As you know，food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas．But who is responsible for the current world food crisis？First，annual world grains output has declined because of climate change．Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization．Besides，faced with the rising energy prices，people have turned to the production of biofuels，which has worsened the severe situation．【高分句型二】（分析原因）
　　Then what should we do to deal with the problem？On one hand，we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology．On the other hand，strict measures should be taken to protect farmland．（解决方法）Of course，to build a harmonious world the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones experiencing food shortage．【高分句型三】（提出建议）
　　As for me，I will call on the people around me to live thriftily．And for the moment，I think，we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future．（发出号召）

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．