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【题目】最近新华中学高三（10）班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息, 给报社写一封信, 介绍讨论的情况, 并发表你的看法。

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少数同学赞成处罚乘客	大多数同学反对处罚乘客
1．减少交通事故,促进交通安全 2．不乘坐醉酒司机的车,不仅是对自己负责, 也是对司机和路人负责	1．乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒 2．即使乘客知道司机饮酒, 如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫, 处罚乘客是不公平的
你的看法：……

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Dear Editor，

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished．

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Yours sincerely，

Li yan

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【答案】

Dear Editor，

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished．The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps to reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety．Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for the drivers and other people on the road．

The majority of the students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not．What’s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice．As far as I am concerned, punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but is also hard to carry out．

Yours sincerely，

Li Yan

【解析】

试题分析 ：写信，是应用文的范畴。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，注意写信的格式。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点分析】

文中所给的句子不看，第一句是一个宾语从句The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps to reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety．少数学生认为，惩罚乘客能够帮助减少交通事故，增加交通安全性。第二段用于陈述多数人的意见。第一句是一个that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句中有一个whether引导的宾语从句，也用了it做形式主语The majority of the students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not．大多数学生，不同意以上的观点，认为，知道司机是否喝醉了是对于普通乘客来说是很困难的。第二句中even if引导了一个让步状语从句，when引导了一个时间状语从句What’s more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice．更重要的，即使乘客知道了司机喝酒了，并且试着劝说司机不要开车，当司机不听劝告的时候，惩罚乘客是不公平的。本文除了使用多个复合从句，还用了一些比较好的短语和结构。The majority of （多数）、The minority of （少数）；not only …but also（不仅…而且）；it is+adj+ for sb to do sth（做某事对于某人来说很…）；What’s more（更重要的）；As far as I am concerned（就我所知）；as well as （也）；carry out（实现）等。整篇文章结构连贯，意思表达明确，格式完整，是一篇不错的范文