Question

17．如图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方的漫画．请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，并发表你的看法．

要点提示：描述漫画内容；结合实际，简述自己的理解与启发．
注意：1．陈述所给要点，可适度发挥．
　2．词数150 左右．
3．作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
As is described in the picture，a person was persuaded into a smalll cage，who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes，heights，small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way．Additionally，the cage，with some snakes inside，was high up on four columns．
According to my understanding，the picture describes a person with some mental disability，as a result of which，he prefers to stay in large spaces with other's company．However，the doctor is trying all his out to help the person，supposing that it's more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them．Instead of offering him medicine，the doctor has his unique way of treating this patient，pushing him to face his problems directly．
From my perspective，life is filled with ups and downs．It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility．Quite the contray，we are supposed to face them with courage and wisdom．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画类写作，要求我们仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方，描述图画并揭示其寓意．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为描述图画并揭示其寓意．第二部分为分析原因．第三部分为发表评论，提出建议．
重点短语与句型：
persuade sb into 说服某人…
cure sb of sth 治愈某人
prefer to宁愿，更喜欢
under no circumstances 决不
高分句型一：However，the doctor is trying all his out to help the person，supposing that it's more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them此句用了现在分词supposing作伴随状语
高分句型二：It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility此句 under no circumstances决不置于句首，部分倒装

解答 As is described in the picture，a person was persuaded into a smalll cage，who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes，heights，small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way．Additionally，the cage，with some snakes inside，was high up on four columns．（描述图画并揭示其寓意）
According to my understanding，the picture describes a person with some mental disability，as a result of which，he prefers to stay in large spaces with other's company．However，the doctor is trying all his out to help the person，supposing that it's more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them．（高分句型一）Instead of offering him medicine，the doctor has his unique way of treating this patient，pushing him to face his problems directly．（分析原因）
From my perspective，life is filled with ups and downs．It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility．（高分句型二） Quite the contray，we are supposed to face them with courage and wisdom．（发表评论，提出建议）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．