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10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；不按要求方式改的不给分！
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
With the development of people's living condition，more and more people possess their own cars．Some of us think it is good to own a car．For instance，it's convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation．Moreover，it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger．It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster．
However，others have different opinions，thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around．Too much cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents and crowdedness．Besides，lack parking lots is another big problem．
As far as I'm concerned，we ought to think careful before buying cars．As if we have cars，we may use it less．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述小汽车虽然是一种方便，快捷和舒适的交通工具，但它释放的废气污染了环境，也容易导致事故，还缺少停车场．因此，我们在买车前应仔细考虑这些问题．

解答 With the development of people's living condition，more and more people possess their own cars．Some of us think it is good to own a car．For instance，it's∧convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation．Moreover，it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger．It also maderelative businesses and industries develop faster．
However，others have different opinions，thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around．Toomuchcars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents and crowdedness．Besides，lack parking lots is another big problem．
As far as I'm concerned，we ought to think careful before buying cars．As if we have cars，we may use it less．
详解：
1．condition改为conditions 考查名词复数．condition表示"情况，环境，形势"时常用复数形式，多指一般的、笼统的情况．
2．加a 考查冠词．means在作"方法，手段"解时是单数名词，可用不定冠词a修饰表示泛指．
3．去掉more 考查形容词比较级．stronger本身是比较级形式，不需要加more．
4．made改为makes 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时，且it是单数形式，谓语动词也用单数三人称形式．
5．up改为off  考查词语用法．give up意为"放弃； 认输"，give off意为"放出； 散发出"，此处应是：放出； 散发出．
6．much改为many 考查形容词．cars是可数名词复数，用many修饰，much修饰不可数名词．
7．lakc改为lacking 考查动名词．分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，用动名词短语lacking parking lots作主语．
8．careful改为carefully 考查副词．think是动词，要用副词修饰．
9．As改为Even 考查词语用法．as if意为"好像，似乎"，even if意为"即使，纵然"，此处应是：即使，纵然．
10．it改为them 考查代词．them指代前文中的cars．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．