Question

【题目】假如你是李明，你的英国网友Tom参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

1) 祝贺他获奖；

2) 肯定他付出的努力；

3) 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。

注意：

1)词数80词左右；

2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3)开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.

For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contest. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition!

So I’m so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件向在中国象棋网络挑战赛中获得了一等奖的英国网友Tom表示祝贺。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 祝贺他获奖；

2. 肯定他付出的努力；

3. 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

offer sth. to sb.；Chinese Chess Network Challenge；show great interest in sth.；succeed in doing sth.；make progress

第三步：连词成句

1. I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.

2. For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day.

3. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition!

4. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together.

(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择：either…or…，or

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改