Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的城市将有一个大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展，请写一封邮件邀请你的朋友Adam同去。内容包括：

1.展出时间和地点；

2. 展出形式与内容；

3. 表达期待。

提示：C0VID-19 （新型冠状病毒肺炎）； pandemic （流行病）

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 结束语已为你写好。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Adam，

How is everything going recently? A large exhibition about heroes fighting against COVID-19 is scheduled in our city. I am writing to invite you to participate in it.

The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours. During that period, you will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses. They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease. All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.

I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive and you will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness. Looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封邮件。

第一步：

审题：邮件 邀请Adam参加大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展

人称：第三人称

时态：一般现在时、一般将来时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分提出邀请，第二部分说明展出时间、地点、内容与形式，第三部分期待他的参加。

要点：

1. 提出邀请：邀请Adam参加大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展

2．展出时间、地点、形式与内容

①时间、地点：7月12 日下午三点，市博物馆

②内容：抗击新冠肺炎疫情的英雄人物展

③形式：图片或视频

3．期待他的参加

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

exhibition；hero；fight against；participate in；from all walks of life；courageous；triumph over；display；in the forms of；impressive；be deeply moved by； devotion；selflessness

第三步：连词成句

(1)A large exhibition is scheduled in our city.

(2)I am writing to invite you to participate in it.

(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.

(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.

(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.

(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.

(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.

(8)They are the most courageous people.

(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.

(10) All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.

(11) I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive.

(12) You will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

将（4）（5）两句用现在分词作状语，连接下面三个句子成一个句子

(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.

(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.

(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.

→The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours.

用定语从句连接下面两个句子

(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.

(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.

→ You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses.

用定语从句连接下面两个句子

(8)They are the most courageous people.

(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.

→They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。