Question

16．请根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，就"乐观"这一话题，用英语写一篇短文．
Optimism always leads to happiness，health and success while pessimism，by contrast，results in hopelessness，sickness and failure．That's because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenge and disappointment in different ways．
注意：1．不得照抄英语提示语；
2．需结合一个事例；
3．字数100-120．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要．
亮点句型一：If you can change your mind from pessimism，you can change your life．如果你能改变你的悲观思想，你可以改变你的生活．If you can change your mind from pessimism是本句中的条件状语从句．
亮点句型二：When I was fed up with reading or writing，I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories，jokes and humors or seeing English films．当我厌倦了阅读或写作，我通常通过阅读一些有趣的英语故事、笑话、幽默或看英文电影来娱乐．When I was fed up with reading or writing是由when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 Optimism is important in all aspects of our life．If you can change your mind from pessimism，you can change your life．（亮点句型一）
     Up to the beginning of Senior Grade Two，I did poorly in my English but I didn't give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself．I kept practicing speaking，listening，reading and writing．When I was fed up with reading or writing，I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories，jokes and humors or seeing English films．（亮点句型二）When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing，I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs．By this means，I always made myself cheerful and optimistic，full of splendid and colorful dreams of future．I kept practicing．Gradually，I made progress in my English．
     Thanks to the optimism，I have become one of the top students in my class by now．

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．