分析 本文是一篇书信类作文,要写的内容有:1.说明写信原因;2.描述书的情况; 3.约定见面时间和地点.需要注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
亮点说明:本文用了三段式的结构,首先介绍了自己,然后写出自己写信的意图.写出了题中所要求的要点,用了被动语态,虚拟语气等写作手法,来写出自己的观点,语言简明不啰嗦.时间地点都很准确,并且字数在要求的范围内.
I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese. (高分句型)
I happen to have one,which I think might help you. (高分句型)
If not,try to find another time that is suitable for both of us. (高分句型)
解答 Dear Tom,
I'm Li Hua,a student of Rongguang Middle School.I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese. (高分句型)I happen to have one,which I think might help you. (高分句型)
The book,entitled New Practical Chinese,is intended for beginners at your level.(高分句型)Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life,it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs.(高分句型) Edited by three language experts,it is widely used by many foreign learners.
If it is convenient to you,let's meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p.m.this Sunday.If not,try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.
(高分句型)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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