Question

8．在中国，餐桌上的浪费（waste on the dining table）一直是人们热议的话题．据报道，每年中国餐桌上浪费的粮食达到惊人的2000亿元（200billion），被倒掉的食物相当于2亿多人一年的口粮．请你以餐桌上的浪费为题，写一篇100字左右的演讲稿．要点如下：
1．阐述目前餐桌浪费的现象；
2．发表你的观点；
3．提出建议或者解决措施
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Ladies and Gentlemen，
The huge amount of waste on the dining table in China seems an urgent  problem                                        Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本题为提纲类写作，根据提示所给材料以"餐桌上的浪费"为题，写一篇100字左右的演讲稿．要点包括：1．阐述目前餐桌浪费的现象；2．发表你的观点；3．提出建议或者解决措施．写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主要时态．
重点词汇：be up to （达到）；call on （号召，呼吁）； phenomenon（现象）；timely（及时地）；In addition（而且）；be supposed to （应该）；pack up （打包）；In conclusion（总之）
高分句型：1．Every year，the waste on the dining table in China is worth up to 200 billion，①which can almost feed 200 million people under poverty line in urban and rural，②as is reported on massive media．
①which引导一个非限制性定语从句；②as这里是代词，指代上文提到的内容．
2．Therefore，it is high time that our government took a range of effective measures to strengthen the management of waste on the dining table．
这是句型"It is high time to do sth"，it做形式主语，不定式短语是真正的主语．
3．In conclusion，only if we make joint efforts，can this problem be gradually solved．
only是副词，位于句首，句子用倒装．

解答 The huge amount of waste on the dining table in China seems an urgent problem．Every year，the waste on the dining table in China is worth up to 200 billion，which can almost feed 200 million people under poverty line in urban and rural，as is reported on massive media（高分句型一）．
In my view，it is necessary to call on the public to draw special attention to this phenomenon．It can't be denied that such critical issue as waste，if not settled timely，will eventually grow into a harmful factor in the development of society．
Therefore，it is high time that our government took a range of effective measures to strengthen the management of waste on the dining table（高分句型二）．In addition，as citizens，we are supposed to raise our awareness of saving．For example，order what is enough and pack up what is left on the table if possible．
In conclusion，only if we make joint efforts，can this problem be gradually solved（高分句型三）．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全，关键短语和句型要写对，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．