Question

假定你是李华，在参加北京外国大学自主招生考试（BFSU’s pre-test）期间，于3月2日入住一家宾馆606房间，3月6日退房。你回家后发现把一个蓝色背包遗失在那里，内有几本备考书籍，一个红色限量版ipod，和一张信用卡。现请用英文给该宾馆经理写一封信，请他/她帮忙寻找并寄回。
信件要点包括：(1)陈述写信原因  (2)简要描述该背包  (3)说明其重要性  (4)·期待回复并表示感谢
注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 信件格式已为你给出。 3.生词： 限量版 special edition
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFDU’s pre-test._______________
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFDU’s pre-test, but I’m writing to ask a favor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.
I checked in on Mar, 2 and out on Mar, 6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 606. It’s a blue,  backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a red ipod of special edition as well as a credit card. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18^th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.
If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua

解析试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求向宾馆经理写一封信，请他/她帮忙寻找自己丢失的东西并寄回。信件要点包括：(1)陈述写信原因  (2)简要描述该背包  (3)说明其重要性  (4)·期待回复并表示感谢，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
考点：考查书信类短文写作。
点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。