Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记, 记述上周六你和父母一起参加奥林匹克森林公园健步走活动的过程。

注意：1．词数不少于60；

2．周记的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Last Saturday, I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk, and I’m Fit.”

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Last Saturday, I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk, and I’m Fit.”

Arriving early in the morning, we were surprised to find many participants of different ages already waiting excitedly at the registration place. We joined them. Then, we gathered at the starting point, stretching arms and legs to prepare ourselves for the coming long distance walking. Soon, a signal was given and off we went along the walking route, which ran around the park. Some people walked briskly, while others just took their time to enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful natural scenery.

After more than one hour’s walking, we finally reached the finish line. The 5km journey was challenging but really enjoyable. My parents and I cheered each other for our success. Regular activities like this not only keep us fit, but also help get us closer to each other and to nature.

【解析】 本文是应用文，要求学生就同学们的要求给新任英语教师写信，故应用一般过去时和第一人称。

文章的时态使用得当，概括文章所要求的全部要点，足见作者语言功底。文中使用了arriving分词短语作状语；while连接的并列句；不定式to prepare短语做目的状语；which引导的非限制性定语从句等的应用和内容要点的完整、上下文连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性，充分证明该文章是一篇佳作。