Question

14．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在其下面写出该加的词．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
  2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    Last weekend I visited my best friend in London，which was supposed to be excited．Melina，whom I have not seen her for three years，offered to take me on a sighting tour by car．Unlucky，she ended up doing everything but that!First，she showed me around the building where she had gotten her first job．Then she drove me to café where she had met her first boyfriend．Before I could say everything，she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her．I was very disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car!Besides，she kept talk about herself all day long!I was fed up with it，so I couldn't make her stop．When she finally decides to call it a day，she turned around and found me asleep!

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文讲述了上周去伦敦看望朋友Melina的经历，这本应该是让人很兴奋的事情，但是Melina滔滔不绝地讲述她的每一件事情，这令作者很厌烦．

解答 Last weekend I visited my best friend in London，which was supposed to be excited．Melina，whom I have not seen her for three years，offered to take me on a sighting tour by car．Unlucky，she ended up doing everything but that!First，she showed me around the building where she had gotten her first job．Then she drove me to∧café where she had met her first boyfriend．Before I could say everything，she smiled at me and said she wanted to take me to another place where was special to her．I was very disappointed when we got on the place where she had bought her car!Besides，she kept talk about herself all day long!I was fed up with it，so I couldn't make her stop．When she finally decides to call it a day，she turned around and found me asleep!
详解：
1．excited改为exciting；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词修饰物，过去分词作形容词修饰人，这里主语which指代上句提到的事情，故用现在分词形式．
2．have改为had；考查动词的时态，本文基本时态用了一般过去时，此处的动作发生在过去的过去，故用过去完成时，把have改为had．
3．Unlucky改为Unluckily；考查副词，这里用副词作状语修饰整个句子．
4．to后面加the；考查定冠词，此处cafe有定语从句where she had met her first boyfriend限制，故前面加the表示特指．
5．everything改为anything；考查不定代词，everything意为"每件事"，anything意为"任何事，任何事物"，结合句意可知此处应该用anything．
6．where改为which/that；考查定语从句，关系代词which/that指代 another place 在定语从句中作主语．
7．on改为to；考查介词，go to someplace 是固定搭配，意为"去某个地方"．
8．talk改为talking；考查非谓语动词，keep doing 是固定搭配，意为"一直持续做某事"．
9．so改为but；考查连词，结合语境分析句意为"我很厌倦，但我不能使她停下来"，所以上下文为转折关系，故用but．
10．decides改为decided；考查动词的时态，此处动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时decided．

点评 短文改错时要注意一下几点：1．快速阅读，整体把握短文大意．2．重视语境以及上下文的关系．3．充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在．