Question

【题目】书面表达
In campus violence cases in Beijing during the last five years, 14 percent of the offenders not only beat others, but also insulted(侮辱)them. They slapped(打耳光)others, made them kneel down, and in some cases took off other peoples clothes.
Violence at schools has been widely reported in media in recent years—the violence among teenagers has drawn public and government attention. On Nov 11, the Ministry of education, along with eight other central sectors, published a guideline on dealing with school violence.
The guideline stressed that students with serious behavioral problems should be handed over to special schools. Or, in more serious cases, they may take criminal responsibility and be sent to prison.
“The common tolerant attitude toward violence should be changed,” wrote Jiaxing Daily. “When teenagers do something wrong, we should tolerate and help them when necessary. But all of this has a limit.”
[写作内容]
( 1 )以约30个词概括上文的内容要点；
( 2 )然后以约120个词写作以下相关内容：
1)校园暴力存在且越来越严重的原因（至少两点）；
2)你认为如何应对校园暴力（至少两点）；
[写作要求]
( 1 )不得直接引用原文中的句子；
( 2 )文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】As is shown in the short passage above, campus violence among teenagers has become an increasingly serious problem, but fortunately, the government has realized it and decided to take measures to deal with it.

There are several factors accounting for the situation worrying us, among which people's tolerant attitude can't be neglected. When campus violence happens, the absence of severe punishments usually makes matters worse, leading to those bad guys being more offensive and aggressive. In addition, when faced with such violence, teen victims are too afraid to report it to parents or the school, let alone call the police.

In a bid to wrestle with the serious problem, joint forces must be involved. Schools should impose severe punishments upon those offenders, even including removing them from school. Under extreme circumstances, sentencing them to prison is a necessity. As for the individuals of victims, they should be encouraged and guided to face the violence bravely and learn to protect themselves.

【解析】本文是一篇提纲式作文，写作要点已经给出，要求考生以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式，写出校园暴力存在且越来越严重的原因以及应对校园暴力所采取的措施。写作过程中注意使用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。