Question

【题目】最近我市政府决定建设高速铁路，围绕这个话题。你班进行了一次讨论。

70%的同学支持这项计划，理由：

1）方便市民出行，减少城市交通堵塞 2）有效地控制城市空气污染

30%的同学反对，理由：

1）造价太高 2）工期太长，影响市民生活。

陈述自己的立场，观点。开头已给，不列入词数。（100词左右）

Recently our class had a discussion about whether the high-speed railway should be built in our city. The results are as follows.__________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently our class had a discussion about whether the high-speed railway should be built in our city. The results are as follows.

70% of the students argue for constructing the high-speed railway, saying that not only is it convenient for the citizens to get around, but it will to some degree relieve the serious situation of traffic. Meanwhile, air pollution in the urban area will be lessened as well.

Nevertheless, the rest 30% believe that it will cost too large amounts of money while the reward may be far from satisfactory. Worse still, the construction will cover a long period of time, which will have side effects on our daily lives.

As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of the former. Much as it could cost, it is of great benefit to us in the long run.

【解析】

试题分析：最近我市政府决定建设高速铁路，围绕这个话题。你班进行了一次讨论。70%的同学支持这项计划，理由：1）方便市民出行，减少城市交通堵塞 2）有效地控制城市空气污染

30%的同学反对，理由：1）造价太高2）工期太长，影响市民生活。陈述自己的立场，观点。开头已给，不列入词数。（100词左右）写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。现在分词做伴随状语：70% of the students argue for constructing the high-speed railway, saying that not only is it convenient for the citizens to get around,宾语从句和让步状语从句的同时使用非常精彩：the rest 30% believe that it will cost too large amounts of money while the reward may be far from satisfactory.非限制性定语从句的使用：the construction will cover a long period of time, which will have side effects on our daily lives.连接词的使用非常合理到位：but；Meanwhile；Nevertheless；Worse still；As far as I am concerned。