Question

【题目】假设你是某中学高二学生李华，你发现学校图书馆的书籍数量少，并且大都非常陈旧，由此导致图书借阅率不高。 请你就此事给外籍校长汤姆（Tom）写一封劝告信，希望学校能购置一些新书。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

I am Li Hua in Senior 2 _____________________________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am Li Hua in Senior 2. Since our school library sits idle for lack of books, I am writing to advise that new books should be added to it. Here are the reasons.

For one thing, the number of books we have at present can’t satisfy our needs. We need far more books to read, as reading can not only open our minds and enrich our lives, but also help us write better essays. Obviously, new books will attract more students to read. For another, some of the bocks in our library have been out of date, so few student would like to read them. Therefore, it is highly necessary for us to read all kinds of newly-published books. Only in this way can we young people keep pace with the times.

I strongly hope that you will consider my suggestions. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，你发现学校图书馆的书籍数量少，并且大都非常陈旧，由此导致图书借阅率不高。请给外籍校长汤姆写一封劝告信，希望学校能购置一些新书。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第1步：审题。根据提示可知全文是一封书信，要求考生给外籍校长汤姆写一封劝告信，希望学校能购置一些新书。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1. 你发现学校图书馆的书籍数量少，并且大都非常陈旧，由此导致图书借阅率不高。 2.劝告校长并希望学校能购置一些新书。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为for lack of books、add to、satisfy one’s needs、attract more students、out of date写作时注意书信的格式和惯用语。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。