Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

May I have your attentions, please? In Saturday, July 27th, there will have a few visits to different places. Everyone is welcomed. All the visitors will be divided into four groups. Each group of visitors can visit one of the place – a factory, a farm, a school or a hospital. Please you sign your name at the Service Desk before 9: 00 a.m. and say what place you wish to visit. We’ll set out after the breakfast at 8 and we will return in the afternoon. We will have lunch at place of visit.

We hope you a pleasant journey. That’ s all.

Thank you.

Answer 1

1.attentions改为 attention

2.In 改为 On

3.Have 改为 be

4.welcomed改为 welcome

5.place 改为 places

6.Please you改为Please

7.say what place 改为say which place

8.after the breakfast 改为after breakfast

9.at place 改为 at one place

10.We hope改为We wish

【解析】

试题分析：

1.attention是不可数名词，故把attentions改为 attention。

2.On ，所以把In 改为 On。

3. be 句型，故把Have 改为 be。

4.welcome 也可作形容词，“受欢迎的”，此处表示的是“每个人是受欢迎的”,所以把welcomed改为 welcome。

5.one of +名词复数，故把place 改为 places。

6.you是多余的，故把Please you改为Please。

7.say what place 改为say which place。

8.after the breakfast 改为after breakfast。

9.at place 改为 at one place。

10.We hope改为We wish。

考点：考查短文改错。