Question

6．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David想了解你高中第一学年的情况．请根据下列所提示的信息给他写一封回信．
1．感叹时间过得快；
2．学习上的得与失；
3．学校生活：交友，课外活动等．
注意：
1.100字左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear David，
                                     
What about your school life？Would you like to share it with me？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge，which makes me very happy
高分句型二：
 In this school，I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely
句型一 which makes me very happy 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在定语从句中作主语
句型二  I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely 该句中有一个由that引导的结果状语从句
此外，该文章中还有以下高级词汇和重要短语：share sth with sb          take part in     make progress in

解答 Dear David，
   How time flies!It is almost one year since I studied in senior high school．I'm glad to share with you my experience in the new school．（表明写作意图）
   I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge，which makes me very happy．（高分句型一）Most excitingly，I've made great progress in English．But I am not good at physics and I'll have to work harder in the next term．
   In this school，I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely．（高分句型二）After class，I often discuss difficult problems and even share my happiness and sorrow with them．In my spare time，I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities，especially ball games．Therefore，I've grown taller and stronger．（描述学校生活）
   What about your school life？Would you like to share it with me？I'm looking forward to your reply．
   Yours
   Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．