Question

8．假设你是李津，你的初中同学阿飞写信告诉你他现在英语写作成绩不好，所以很焦虑，请回信给他一些鼓励和建议，内容包括：
1．不要焦虑，不要失去信心；
2．给他几点建议；
3．相信他一定能学好英语．
注意：词数不少于100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear He Fei，
Dear He Fei，
I've received your letter and deeply understand how you feel now．However，don't be disappointed or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who finds it difficult to write well．I suppose the following suggestions might be of some help to you．
To begin with，it is essential to memorize some words，phrases as well as sentence structures，because they are the basis of language learning，just like bricks in a building．Additionally，read English articlesuch as possible and recite the good ones so that you may know how to put them to use whenever possible．Last but not least，keep in mind that there are many things that can't be learnt immediately，so never be frustrated when you fail in one or two exams．
Anyway，just keep going with a strong belief that you can improve your written Englishas long as you never give up．Just as the saying goes："Practice makes perfect．"
Yours
LiJin．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮点句型一：However，don't be  disappointed or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who finds it difficult to  write well．然而，不要失望，甚至怀疑自己，因为你不是唯一一个觉得写不好的人．本句中who finds it difficult to  write well是一个定语从句，修饰the only one．
亮点句型二：Additionally，read English articlesuch as possible and recite the good ones so that you may know how to put them to use whenever possible．此外，尽可能地阅读英语文章和背诵好的文章，以便你可以知道如何使用它们．本句中so that 引导的是目的状语从句．

解答 Dear He Fei，
    I've received your letter and deeply understand how you feel now．However，don't be  disappointed or even doubt yourself as you are not the only one who finds it difficult to  write well．（亮点句型一）I suppose the following suggestions might be of some help to you．
    To begin with，it is essential to memorize some words，phrases as well as sentence  structures，because they are the basis of language learning，just like bricks in a building．Additionally，read English articlesuch as possible and recite the good ones so that you may know how to put them to use whenever possible．（亮点句型二）Last but not least，keep in mind that  there are many things that can't be learnt immediately，so never be frustrated when you fail  in one or two exams．
    Anyway，just keep going with a strong belief that you can improve your written English as long as you never give up．Just as the saying goes："Practice makes perfect．"
  Yours
LiJin

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．