Question

1．假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你校学生会拟下周二下午四点举行英语口语大赛，你去拜访校国际部外教Jack，恰巧他外出，请根据以下要点给他留一封短信．
    1．邀请Jack做评委，告知比赛时间、地点等；
    2．询问赛后是否有时问辅导前两名选手参加市级比赛．
    注意：1．词数：l20-150
         2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jack，
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封信，告知校国际部外教Jack 学生会拟定下周二下午四点举行英语口语大赛．写作要点：1．邀请Jack做评委，告知比赛时间、地点等；2．询问赛后是否有时间辅导前两名选手参加市级比赛．
写作时人称以第一人称和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重要短语：happen to do （碰巧做某事），would like to do （想要做某事），as follows（如下），in order to （为了），hold a competition（举行一个比赛），invite sb to do（邀请某人做某事），be based on （在…基础上），make some comments on sth （做出评论），set aside（搁置，把…放一边），in preparation for（为…作准备），think highly of（高度赞扬…）．

【高分句型】
1．You are expected to ask the contestants a few questions based on their speech and make some comments on their performance．
这里是过去分词短语based on作状语，主句为You are expected to ask the contestants a few questions，主句的主语为you，与所给动词base存在逻辑上的被动关系，"sth be based on"．
2．would you be kind enough to set aside some time to help the top two winners in preparation for the City English Speaking Competition？
这里是由动词不定式作目的状语，"be+adj+enough to do sth"，介词短语in preparation for …在整个句中作状语．
3．I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation．
这里是it作形式宾语，if you could accept our invitation 是真正的宾语，常用结构为"I appreciate/love/like/dislike/hate等+it+if/when…"．

解答 Dear Jack，
I came to your office to visit you，but you happenedto be out．What I'd like to talk to you is as follows：
In order to improve students'spoken English，the Student's Union will hold an English Speaking Competition at 4p．m．next Tuesday in the School Lecture Hall．【高分句型】We sincerelyinvite you to be a judge if it is convenient for you．You are expected to askthe contestants a few questions based on their speech and make some comments ontheir performance．【高分句型】（邀请Jack做评委，告知比赛时间、地点等）
What's more，would you be kind enough to setaside some time to help the top two winners in preparation for the City EnglishSpeaking Competition？【高分句型】（询问赛后是否有时间辅导前两名选手参加市级比赛）
I would appreciate it if you could accept ourinvitation．【高分句型】Your early reply is highly thought of．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．