Question

在中国西部贫困地区有许多留守儿童。他们的父母外出打工挣钱养家。以下这幅图片展现了这群留守儿童的一个生活场景。请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 描述图片内容；
2. 简析“留守儿童”这一现象的成因；
3. 谈谈你的感受和愿望。
参考词汇： 文具stationery(不可数名词); 留守儿童left-behind children
要求:
1）词数：150词左右。短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2）文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
As is shown in the picture, several children are crouching (蹲)to the ground in a circle.   

Answer 1

As we can see in the picture, several children are crouching to the ground in a circle. They are writing down “Mum and Dad, I am missing you.” These left-behind children badly need stationery, dictionaries, schoolbags, TV sets and so on to do well in their studies and enjoy their everyday life.
One of the reasons is that they live in a less-developed western area with poor transportation and a low-level education. To improve their living conditions, their parents have to go to big cities to make more money, leaving them at home.
Personally, I really feel sorry for them and I believe that each child should have the right to receive a good education and enjoy a happy life together with their parents. I suggest we do something such as donating clothes or books, raising money and so on to help them.
I’m sure they will be able to live a happy and healthy life in the future if more people would like to offer help to them.               (152 words)

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，认真读图，可知图画反映了留守儿童的一个生活场景，写作时不要仅仅对图画进行描述，也要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点是使用了词组和句式多变：have the right to 有权利做…，enjoy a happy life享受幸福的生活， together with和…一起， One of the reasons is that they live in a less-developed western area with poor transportation and a low-level education.这句话用了表语从句， To improve their living conditions, their parents have to go to big cities to make more money, leaving them at home.这句话用了不定式和现在分词， I suggest we do something such as donating clothes or books, raising money and so on to help them.这句话用了虚拟语气。