Question

要求：根据以下汉语提示，完成下面小作文。

注意：添加适当连接语，使文章结构完整、语意连贯。

下周末，学校即将召开高三学生家长会。英语老师要求学生用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对家长会的看法。

要点如下：

为了相互沟通，提高学习成绩，我校将在下周末召开高三年级家长会。

我们班的同学们对此事看法不一。

部分同学认为家长会是必要的，可以让父母对我们的学校生活、学习状况了解更多，进而促进我们的学习。

而且，父母们可以从老师那里得到一些科学的建议和有效的信息。

这对我们今年繁忙的学习和生活有很大的帮助。毕竟，父母不是专业的教育者。

然而，部分同学认为家长会是没有用的，因为他们不想让家长知道自己在学校不好的行为表现以及不好的成绩。

我认为，沟通与理解是最重要的。我们应该把家长会看作家校沟通与交流的平台。因此，高三家长会是很有必要的。

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Answer 1

After the examination, a parents’ meeting will be held in our school this weekend. Parents’ meetings are often held to help parents contact the school and teachers and improve the students’ studies, but there are some different voices in our class.

Most students think it is of great importance to have the meeting for their parents because in this way parents will know more about their children at school, which of course contributes to their growth. What is more, parents can get some good advice and useful information from teachers. After all, parents are not professional educators and they need some guidance when communicating with children. On the contrary, a minority of students hold the view that it is useless because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school.

As far as I’m concerned, understanding and communicating is the most important. A parents’ meeting should be a good platform on which parents, teachers and even children themselves can voice their opinions. So parents’ meetings are quite necessary.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给提示用英语写一篇短文，谈谈对家长会的看法。写作要点包括： 开家长会的目的；同学们的看法；自己的看法这三个方面。注意使用关联词语，使作文结构完整、语意连贯；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了宾语从句、定语从句、原因状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句it is of great importance to have the meeting for their parents；原因状语从句①because in this way parents will know more about their children at school，②because they think their parents may know their poor marks and improper behavior at school；定语从句①which of course contributes to their growth，②on which parents, teachers and even children themselves can voice their opinions；同位语从句 that it is useless等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用after the examination, but, what is more, after all, on the contrary, as far as I’m concerned等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了be of importance, in this way, communicate with, a minority of, contribute to等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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