Question

书面表达（满分20分）

人人都想成功，但是生活中失败却不可避免。作为一名高中生，我们该如何看待失败？请结合以下提示用英语写一篇短文。

失败的积极意义	1. 有助于认识自身优缺点
2. 促进自我提高
3. ……
应对失败的措施	1. 勇敢面对
2. 分析原因
3. ……
自我感受	……

注意：

1、字数150左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。

2、对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。

All of us experience failure and are afraid of it. However, every coin has two sides.____

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Answer 1

【答案】

All of us experience failure and are afraid of it. However, every coin has two sides. Failure also has its advantages. It provides us with an opportunity to see our strengths and weaknesses clearly, enabling us to find what is the most suitable. On the other hand, failure can be a good teacher, telling us where we need improvements and where we should invest more time and energy.

Failure is something unavoidable. Properly handled, though, it can teach us a lot. First of all, we should face it bravely instead of complaining about the unfairness of life. What’s more, we should analyze the reasons timely to avoid making similar mistakes. Last but not least, we are supposed to make appropriate changes and more efforts. Only in this way are we more likely to succeed.

As for me, I have a positive attitude towards failure, before I believe there is always some wisdom to be learned from failure. In a word, I will keep in mind that failure is the mother of success.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文，写作时注意：1. 仔细审题。根据写作任务，要求学生认真审读提纲，领会意图，捕捉信息，确定文章时态及体裁。2. 撰写提纲。构思文章要点，写出每个段落主题句、关键词，然后确定细节和内容要点。3. 简写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后，开始写作，有意识地使用固定句型、关联词，把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体，形成基本连贯的初稿。复查是书面表达不可缺少的环节。要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。