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11．同学们即将进入高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，向学生们征集好的学习方法．假如你叫李华，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，给出你己或者你认为好的学习方法：
1．制定好合适的复习计划；
2．上课认真听讲、思考，仔细记笔记；
3．制定合理的休息时间，适当做体育锻炼，放松自己，对高考要有一个积极的态度，不要太紧张；
4．可以向老师寻求帮助，得到老师们的鼓励．
注意：词数100词左右，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯．（考生也可适当给出其他好的学习方法）．开头已给出，不计词数．
参考词汇：college entrance examination 高考；positive attitude 积极的态度；encouragement 鼓励；proper合适的
We will enter the stage of Senior Three soon．In order to improve the learning efficiency，we had better make a proper learning plan for ourselves．Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and tryour best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）In addition，we ought to remember to stay happy and have a positive attitude so that we can be energetic while preparing for the college entrance examination．Finally，we can ask our teachers for encouragement if we need their help．
In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三） Our efforts will pay off．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息    写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In order to以便，为了；take notes记笔记；What's more而且；In addition另外；Finally最后；In a word总之；
Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and try our best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）
In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三）

解答 We will enter the stage of Senior Three soon．In order to improve the learning efficiency，we had better make a proper learning plan for ourselves．Besides，to get better results，it's wise to be very careful in class and try our best to take notes all the time in the classroom．（高分句型一）
      What's more，we shoud make a suitable timetable for us to rest，do some necessary exercise every day and relax ourselves．（高分句型二）In addition，we ought to remember to stay happy and have a positive attitude so that we can be energetic while preparing for the college entrance examination．Finally，we can ask our teachers for encouragement if we need their help．
       In a word，I believe we will be admitted into our ideal universities，since we have worked hard for 3 years．（高分句型三） Our efforts will pay off．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．