Question

1．Friendship never lasts without understanding and forgiveness．请用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记叙一个你和朋友之间发生的难忘的小故事．要求如下：
1．记叙事情经过；
2．简要说明你的感受或从中得到的启发．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Had tom passed it in time，we would certainly have two．
如果汤姆及时传球的话，我们将可以赢得两分．
高分句型二：
I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a more constructive role because it teaches us the art of compromise．
我相信学习要宽容对方可以发挥建设性的作用因为它教会我们妥协的艺术．

解答 Two years ago，my friend Tom and I took part in the basketball final of our school on behalf of our class．With only 20 seconds left，our team still took a lead by two points．To our favor，the ball was in Tom's hand!Had tom passed it in time，we would certainly have two（高分句型一）．But Tom chose to break through．Suddenly，our rival stole the ball，and shot a three points!After the match，he even blamed me．I was so angry that I complained it to our teacher．But the teacher told us to forgive him，saying forgiveness is a good medicine．Finally，I chose to have a heart-to-heart chat with Tom，and he apologized to me．
  I believe learning to be tolerant with each other can play a more constructive role because it teaches us the art of compromise（高分句型二）．Meanwhile，communication contributes to the solution to this problem for friendship is something that needs love and care．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．