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12．假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语．请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信．
1 上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习
2 词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文
3 课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力
注意：词数120-150，短文的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总数
内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯
Dear Wang Mei，
I am very glad to have receive your E-mail．Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school
First of all，you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class．（高分句型一）As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance．（高分句型二）You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud．What's more，try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class．In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English．Last but not least，you should develop theHabit of keeping a diary，which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt．（高分句型三）
I hope these suggestions will be of use to you．Remember：where there is a will，there is a way．
Best wishes
yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：First of all首先；take notes 记笔记；go over 复习；As is known to all众所周知；What's more而且；Last but not least最后同样最重要；be of use 有用的
First of all，you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class．（高分句型一）
As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance．（高分句型二）
Last but not least，you should develop the Habit of keeping a diary，which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Mei，
        I am very glad to have receive your E-mail．Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school
        First of all，you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class．（高分句型一）As is known to all，vocabulary is of great importance．（高分句型二）You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud．What's more，try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class．In this way you  can improve your listening and spoken English．Last but not least，you should develop the Habit of keeping a diary，which helps your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt．（高分句型三）
       I hope these suggestions will be of use to you．Remember：where there is a will，there is a way．
       Best wishes
                                                                                                                    yours，
                                                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．