Question

【题目】假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom来信询问你的近况。请根据以下提示给他回复一封邮件

1. 上周刚参加了高三开学典礼,并代表高三学生发言;

2. 个人的感受以及对高三的规划

注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am more than delighted to hear from you. Everything has been going well with me so far.

Last week, I attended the opening ceremony designed for Senior Three students in our school. At the ceremony, I gave a speech on behalf of all the Senior Three students, expressing our thanks to all the teachers for their hard work and help. I also promised that all my schoolmates and I would make every effort to achieve our dreams.

As you know, in China, the students, who have to take college entrance examinations, will always have a tough time in the last year in senior high school, and so will I. But I will take the challenge bravely, making full use of my time to improve my study, and meanwhile, trying to keep in a good state physically.

Best wishes！

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一封给朋友的回信。学生们需要作为李华，按照题干中的要点介绍最近的高三开学典礼情况以及自己的感受以及对高三的规划。

第1步：审题。确定时态和人称。根据提示：你作为李华，向Tom介绍近况。介绍上周刚参加的高三开学典礼时时态应以一般过去时为主，介绍规划时以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。

第2步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：more than delighted (特别高兴)，going well with me（我一切都很好），the opening ceremony（开学典礼），gave a speech (发表演讲)，on behalf of（代表），expressing our thanks to…（对……表达感谢），make every effort to（全力做），making full use of（利用好）等。

第3步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。

第4步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用连词、过渡词和插入语，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如定语从句等，以提高文章档次。