Question

【题目】阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was a peaceful night. I was sleeping with my brothers, feeling warm and comfortable. Mama was sleeping nearby, covered by snow. Papa was somewhere nearby, watching over us. There was a bright moon and we had all had a good meal of venison (鹿肉) Papa had caught earlier.

“Uncle Louis is coming”, Papa said. We loved Uncle Louis. He was a funny wolf, and always had interesting things to tell us and show us.

A little while later, Uncle Louis appeared. We did not approach him with respect the way we approached Papa. We flew at him, jumped all over him, and rolled him in the snow. Uncle Louis laughed and patted us with his paws. He is black all over, with yellow eyes, and he is very tall.

“It's the longest night of the year” , Uncle Louis said, “Does everyone feel like taking a run through the woods? I want to show you something unusual.”

Hearing that, Papa warned that it was dangerous to go near that pack of humans who lived in the woods.

“They are hardly dangerous”, Uncle Louis laughed, “They are so clumsy and make so much noise. They are not able to get near us--or even see us if we don't want them to. Besides, this is their special night. They are quite peaceful and won't be bothering about wolves.”

“Oh, please, Papa, let us run through the woods with Uncle Louis and see something unusual! “ We all begged.

“It is a fine night”, Papa smiled, “I must admit, I do feel like running.”

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；

2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1

And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods.

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Paragraph 2

We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans’ place.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1

And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods. It was almost midnight. The snow felt crispy and crunchy under our feet. The moon shone silver on my brother's fur, and the stars were as bright as diamonds. As we dashed through the woods, we breathed the cold air deep into our lungs, feeling refreshed. With Papa and Uncle Louis leading the way, I felt strong and light as though I could run forever. Then we smelled something nice.

Paragraph 2

We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans' place. It was the first time my brothers and I had ever approached those wooden things, which, according to Uncle Louis, were made by putting pieces of wood together. We didn't see any humans, but we could hear them singing together inside the wooden things with warm light shining out through the holes. It was peaceful. I thought, “Even if they are dangerous, they are animals, just like we are.” Then we threw back our heads and sitting on the hillside above the place where the humans live, we wolves sang, too, on this unusual night.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知，文章记叙了作者是一只小狼，一个宁静的夜晚，Louis叔叔来到了他们家，并提议去树林里跑一跑，有人提醒他们住在树林里的人很危险，Louis叔叔告诉他们人类并不是危险，于是他们往树林走去。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我们所有人都出发了，向树林走去。所以后文应该是讲述他们进入树林后的情况，在爸爸和Louis叔叔的带领下，作者感到强壮和轻松，仿佛可以永远奔跑下去。第二段开头是：我们停了下来，坐在山坡上，下面是人类的地盘。本段应该写他们在山坡上看到的东西，他们听到人类在木屋里唱歌，温暖的光线从洞里照射出来。在这个不寻常的夜晚，他们也唱了起来。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。