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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!

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分析 本文主要介绍浙江古镇---乌镇，它有六千年的历史，也有许多小桥．晚上有各种各样的灯，真是一个令人惊奇的水乡．

解答 Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，∧they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!
详解：
1．had改为have 考查动词时态．根据句中already及many times，表示visit虽然发生在过去，但对现在造成了影响，要用一般现在时态．
2．Locating改为Located 考查过去分词．it与locate之间是动宾关系，用过去分词作状语．be located in意为"位于，坐落于"．
3．which改为it 考查代词．Like many small towns in the southern area是介词短语，不需要用连词连接，it指代Wuzhen．
4．through改为over/across 考查介词．across表示动作是在某一物体的表面进行的； through表示动作是在三维空间进行的，四面八方都有东西．across和over两者都表示从一侧向另一侧的运动．本文应是在表面通过，用across或over．
5．加and 考查连词．在英语中，两个分句之间用一个连词，此处表示并列关系，用and连接．
6．enjoying改为enjoy 考查动词不定式．此处动词不定式表示目的，作目的状语．
7．attractively改为attractive 考查形容词．be动词后用形容词作表语．
8．light改为lights 考查名词复数．light是可数名词，其前有all kinds of修饰时用复数形式．
9．去掉for 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词pictures在从句中作宾语，take pictures意为"拍照"，不需要介词for．
10．an改为the 考查冠词．此处amazing water country指Wuzhen，表示特指用定冠词the．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．