Question

4．就学生目前过重的课业负担写一篇文章．文章必须包含以下内容：
•简述学生课业负担；
•造成课业负担过重的原因；
•提出1-2个解决办法．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就学生目前过重的课业负担写一篇文章，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：简述学生课业负担；•造成课业负担过重的原因；•提出1-2个解决办法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为简述学生课业负担；造成课业负担过重的原因．第二部分为提出1-2个解决办法．
重点短语与句型：
be  burdened with 负担…
 stay up  熬夜
On the other hand另一方面
make full use of充分利用
高分句型一：There are many reasons accounting for this phenonmenon．此句用了现在分词短语作后置定语
高分句型二：Only in this way may the problem finally be solved此句only+介词短语，主句部分倒装

解答 Nowadays，students are burdened with heavy workloads．They not only have to study very hard in the daytime but also stay up late to finish their homework．There are many reasons accounting for this phenonmenon．高分句型一 Maybe the most important one is the pressure they may face in the future．On the other hand，parents and teachers expect too much of them，because they think nowadays the social competition is very intense．（简述学生课业负担以及造成课业负担过重的原因）
The problem is becoming more and more serious and it's time for us to do something to change the situation．First，teachers should reform their classroom activities to make full use of the time in class．Besides，students should improve their learning efficiency．Only in this way may the problem finally be solved．高分句型二（提出1-2个解决办法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．