Question

【题目】假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生。你将参加某所著名大学的自主招生考试。根据要求，你需要用英语写一封自荐信，介绍自己的情况。你的自荐信包括如下内容：

1、自我介绍和写信的目的；

2、你自身的优势和未来的打算；

3、报考这个学校的原因；

4、希望能被录取。

注意：1、词数为100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam ,

I’m Li Hua ._______________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________

I sincerely hope you will consider this application .

Yours ,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua. I am going to graduate from senor high school in June. I’m writing to introduce myself.

I’m one of the top students in my school. I love arts very much and I like reading. Besides doing well in my lessons, I am good at logical thinking and reasoning. I plan to major in law so that I can become a lawyer and put my talent to good use in the future.

As we all know, your university is famous worldwide, with plenty of advanced teaching facilities and many famous professors. I expect to study there and make my dream come true by working hard. If I am accepted, I will make full use of my time to work on my lessons and improve myself in all aspects.

I do hope to be admitted to your university. I consider it a great honor to be part of it.

I sincerely hope you will consider this application.

Yours’

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类短文，同时也属于应用文中的自荐信。使用第一人称和一般现在时为主。要点：1、自我介绍和写信的目的；2、你自身的优势和未来的打算；3、报考这个学校的原因；4、希望能被录取。提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点。

【范文亮点】：本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，如Besides；另外高级句式的使用也较多，如. As we all know, your university is famous worldwide, with plenty of advanced teaching facilities and many famous professors.中的定语从句用法。If I am accepted, I will make full use of my time to work on my lessons and improve myself in all aspects.中的if从句等。