Question

某英语报社开辟了中学生习作专栏。本期的话题是：注重日常学习、工作和生活中的细节。因为细节往往决定成败。请你以“We Should Pay Much Attention to Details”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些看法。

注意：1．词数120左右；

2．短文中不能出现本人相关信息。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We Should Pay Much Attention to Details

Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details. But sometimes it is the details that determine our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing. Since we have realized the importance of details, what should we do? First, we should form the habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more, we should learn to keep the balance of quantity and quality. We may find that when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes we will make. Why? Because when we work at high speed, the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details.

As far as I’m concerned, we should keep it in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is of no significance.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文，关于注重日常学习、工作和生活中的细节。因为细节往往决定成败。要点和开头已经给出.我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。要看清题目要求，短文须包括所有要点，但不要逐字翻译；可以适当增加情节，使内容连贯

考点：话题类作文

点评：本文属于话题类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。同时要注意要求的字数，120 ～150，切不可少于120字，同时也不要写得过于冗长，适度即可。