Question

10．利用提示写出介绍自己的句子．
a．my name is b．I was born in c．My father worked as d．I studied e．I studied at
f．I am g．I live in h．I am currently working on i．In my spare time I like
j．At the weekends I often．

Answer 1

分析 本文为半开放性写作．要求来介绍自己．提示虽然清晰，但需要读者继续扩展，写作内容包括：我的姓名，出生地，父亲的工作，我的主修科目及地点，我的居住地，最近在做什么，我的课余爱好，周末常做的事情．注意要丰富文章内容．审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称使用一人称．
重要短语：
cultivate my taste 提升我的品味，well known 有名的，enormous impact 巨大的影响．
高分句子：
1．I am sure that reading some elegant sentence or the beautiful things described in the book will make us feel relax and comfortable．本句整体为that引导的宾语从句，从句中又含有以some elegant sentence or the beautiful things described in the book 做主语的主语从句．
2．Despite what many might think，English movies is well known across hundreds of nations all over the world．本句为Despite引导的让步状语从句从句．
3．It would be safe to assume that English Movies is going to be around for a long time and have an enormous impact on the lives of many people．本句中含有重要句式，It would be safe to assume that，可以正确地总结．

解答 My name is Tom and I was born in England．I am  21 years old now．My father worked as an English teacher．I studied literature in Machester university．I am currently working on Chinese ancient literature，for Reading can cultivate my taste．I am sure that reading some elegant sentence or the beautiful things described in the book will make us feel relax and comfortable．（高分句型）In my spare time I like reading，swimming and dancing with my friends．At the weekends I often go to cinema with my family．Despite what many might think，English movies is well known across hundreds of nations all over the world．In my opinion，some excellent movies has been around for several centuries and has a very important meaning in the lives of many．It would be safe to assume that English Movies is going to be around for a long time and have an enormous impact on the lives of many people．（高分句型）

点评 本篇文章已经给出了提示的自我介绍的句型，而仅仅凭借这些写作是不够的，一是句型简单，太过单一，二是内容不丰富，字数也不够．因此考生需要找准自己能够发挥的点，例如，我的爱好，或者我的工作环境，我常做的事等等，来进行补充，扩写．在扩写中应用上高水平的句型以及词汇词组，来增加作文亮点，使作文脱颖而出．