Question

最近，你看到某英文报社正在征集主题为“如何才能受人欢迎”的短文，对此你很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法，给该报社投稿。

要点提示：

1、衣着干净、整齐，保持微笑

2、诚实，乐于助人

3、懂得与人合作

4、其他

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Answer 1

How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieve popularity? In fact, it is very simple. The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly. In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another important step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. It’s also important to put others first. If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us. I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。最近，你看到某英文报社正在征集主题为“如何才能受人欢迎”的短文，对此你很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法，给该报社投稿。要把所提示的点写全，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。不要总是用简单句，根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在100词左右，不要太多或太少。

【亮点说明】

We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly.句中包含一个that引导的状语从句；In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. 句中运用了一般将来时态的被动语态；We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. 句中包含一个whenever引导的时间状语从句；If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us.句中含一个if引导的条件状语从句；I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.句中含一个宾语从句和一个条件状语从句。

考点：考查话题类作文。