Question

进入高中以来，同学们倍感学习任务重，压力大。许多同学争分夺秒甚至连课间十分钟的休息时间也花在学习上。针对这一现象，请以A Ten-minute Break为题，写一篇词数为100左右的短文，短文的内容必须包括以下几点

1.十分钟的课间休息是必要的

2.要注意休息的方式

3.我通常是怎样利用这十分钟的

  As students of Senior Middle school, we have to study from early morning till late evening.                                                                      

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As students of Senior Grade Three, we have to study from early morning till late evening. With great pressure, many of us grasp every minute to study, even a ten-minute break.

Therefore to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important and necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.

During the ten-minute break we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest instead of getting more tired

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercises, such as a free chat or a walk with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again

【解析】本文讨论的内容是学生非常熟悉的，具有很强的可写性。文章的要点并不是很清晰，需要考生自己梳理，属于半开放性的作文。在写这篇文章时，一定要注意谋篇布局，列出自己要写的要点，在第三点上可以做适当的发挥。注意使用合适的连接词和高级的句型如强调句型，倒装句之类，让文章更有档次。