Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays, there is a increasing number of people joining in the activities of volunteering．It’s well-known that volunteering jobs are making contributions to society with something in return．It’s as the Spirit of Lei Feng．However, knowing this, there are still many people would like to devote themselves to this trend．For instance, the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games had such many volunteers. They make lots of contributions to the success of the Olympics. Moreover, we can often see many students go to visit the old to take warm to them．Even though some people’s career is a volunteer．They are ready to helping others．Although the volunteers are much more common, we still need to thank they for devoting themselves to society．

Answer 1

【答案】1. a→an 2. something→nothing 3. as→like 4. people后面加who 5. such→so 6. make→made 7. warm→warmth 8. though去掉 9. helping→help 10. they→them

【解析】1. 因为increasing是以元音音素开头，表示“一”时，冠词用an，故把a改成an。

2. 句意：志愿者就是不求社会的回报。故把something改成nothing。

3. 句意：它像雷锋精神一样。like“像……一样”，故把as改成like。

4. 因为是修饰表示数量的形容词many，所以把such改成so。

5. 句意：他们为奥运会的成功做出了许多贡献。根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把make改成made。

6. 此处people是先行词，指人，在后面的定语从句中作主语，不可省略，故在people后面加who。

7. 句意：给老年人带来温暖。用名词作宾语，故填warmth。

8. 句意：甚至一些人的事业就是一名志愿者。此处不是“即使”的意思，故把though去掉。

9. 固定搭配：be ready to do sth.“准备做某事”，故把helping改成help。

10. 句意：感谢他们。此处用代词的宾格作动词thank的宾语，故把they改成them。