Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号^，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 \ 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线 ，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

In the village that I grew up , everyone knew an old man, who lived a simply life and spent all his time painting. The villagers used to admiring his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends. Whenever he was offered money, he would not take them. He said he painted for a pleasure. He once gave one of his painting to my father, who actually wasn’t interested in art. Years later I found it in our old house. By that time the old man has died and people started to recognize his paintings as great works of art, which was worth lots of money. An art gallery made me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I nearly sold it, so then I decided not to. It always reminds me my childhood and of the old man who didn’t really want to make money by painting.

Answer 1

【答案】1. that--where

2. simply---simple

3. admiring---admire

4. them---it

5. a去掉

6. painting-paintings

7. has--had

8. was---were

9.so--but

10. 加of

【解析】考查定语从句。句意：在我长大的村庄……。“where I grew up”是定语从句，修饰the village，从句主谓宾齐全，关系词在从句中作地点状语，用关系副词where，故将that改为where。

考查形容词。修饰名词用形容词作定语，simple“简单的”修饰名词life。故将simply改为simple。

考查动词。句意：村民们过去很欣赏他的作品，他经常送给朋友他的画。used to do sth.“故去常常……”，to是不定式符号，接动词原形。故将admiring改为admire。

考查代词。句意：无论什么时候给他钱，他总是不要。it指上文提到的money，代替不可数名词用it。故将them改为it。

考查冠词。句意：他说他画画是为了快乐。根据语境可知，pleasure“快乐”，此处是不可数名词。故去掉pleasure前的a。

考查名词。“one of+名词复数”是固定搭配，表示“……之一”。故将painting改为paintings。

考查动词。根据时间状语“By that time”并结合文章主时态是一般过去时可推断，“老人去世”是发生在“过去的过去”的事情，用过去完成时，故将has改为had。

考查主谓一致。“which was worth lots of money”是定语从句，修饰works，关系代词which在从句中作主语，从句谓语动词与先行词保持人称和数的一致，works是可数名词复数，定语从句的谓语动词用复数。故将was改为were。

考查连词。句意：一家艺术画廊给5000美元买这幅画，我差一点卖掉它，但是后来我决定不卖了。前后分句是转折关系，故将so改为but。

考查介词。句意：这幅画总是让我想起我的童年时光，想起并不真正通过作画来赚钱的老人。remind sb. of sth.“使某人想起某事”是常用搭配。故me后加of。