Question

20．假设你现在正参加一场英语演讲比赛，你抽到的演讲题目是Smile for Life，and Every Day will be Sunshine，请你就该话题展开演讲．你的演讲必须包含以下三个方面的内容：
1．你对此话的理解； 2．用一个事例来支持你的理解； 3．总结发言．
注意：词数120左右．首尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Ladies and Gentlemen，
It's my honour to give a speech here．My topic of speech is"Smile for Life，and Every Day will be Sunshine"．
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Thanks for your attention!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Once we adopt a positive attitude towars life，we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way，realize our dreams and gain success．一旦我们对生活采取一种积极的态度，我们会克服在我们道路上的不论什么困难，也会实现我们的梦想，取得成功．
句型二：As①we can see in the story，it②is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all．在这个故事中我们可以看到，乐观的态度是最重要的．
本句话是一个复合句，首先是一个as引导的非限制性定语从句，as在这个从句中作see的宾语．另外，主句包含了一个强调句型，强调的是主语 an optimistic attitude．

解答 Ladies and Gentlemen，
     It's my honour to give a speech here．My topic of speech is"Smile for Life，and Every Day will be Sunshine"． It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life．Once we adopt a positive attitude towars life，we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way，realize our dreams and gain success．（高分句型一，用于引起下文，总领全文）
     Here I share one of my experiences with you．With the College Entrance Examination drawing near，I was filled with great anxiety．Under great pressure，I couldn't apply myself to study，resulting in failing an important examination．And you can guess，I got very frustrated．I remember clearly when I was in a bad mood，my headteacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and gave me a badge with a big smile on it and said，"In life we all have those moments when we can't achieve what we want．It is natural．Don't allow those moments to weaken you，but turn them into motivation and let them inspire you．"The badge she gave to me was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life．Consequently，I gained what I deserved in the next examination．
     As we can see in the story，it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all．（高分句型二，用于总结上文，承上启下）It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and with smile，you can improve your result to achieve anything you want in life．

点评 本篇书面表达是一个半开放的写作．半开放性写作给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示，给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides，further，last but not least等．在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．