Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My parents and I went to the park last Sunday. There were lots of visitor standing in front of ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightening animals that I quickened their steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had a hard time look for them, but I had no lucky. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Bad still, I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometers.

Answer 1

1.visitor改成visitors

2.ticket前加the

3.buy改成bought

4.too改成so

5.their改成my

6.look改成looking

7.lucky改成luck

8.alone改成lonely

9.Bad改成Worse

10.把home前的to去掉

【解析】

1.1】lots of 后跟可数名词复数，visitor改成visitors

2.2】此处特指卖票的窗口，所以ticket前加the

3.3】waited 和buy 是并列关系，buy也用一般过去时态，故把buy改成bought

4.4】固定结构so…that…如此---以至于---，引导结果状语从句，故把too改成so

5.5】句子的主语是I,根据句意应该是加快了我的步伐，所以把their改成my

6.6】固定搭配have a hard time（in）doing做某事很艰难。故把look改成looking

7.7】no后跟名词，所以把lucky改成luck，句意：我没运气。

8.8】alone单独、独自，lonely孤独的、寂寞的。此处句意是我感到孤独，所以把alone改成lonely

9.9】固定搭配worse still更糟糕的是，所以把Bad改成Worse

10.10】home是副词，前面不用加to，所以把home前的to去掉

考点：考查短文改错。