Question

【题目】假如你是李华、你在英语学习上遇到了一些困惑，希望通过署期学习取得更大进步，请给你的外教John写封邮件，询问以下内容。

内容：

1. 暑期英语学习的建议；

2. 下学期的学习内容。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I am Li Hua, a student in your class. You always impress us deeply with your passionate and enthusiastic teaching style and remain one of the favorite teachers in many students’ hearts. Therefore, with the intention of making some improvement in my English, I am writing to enquire of you how I can make the most of my summer vacation.

To begin with, despite many years’ learning of English, I still feel puzzled in some aspects, for instance, writing. I always find myself trapped in the situation where Chinese stands between me and what I want to express, that is to say, I can’t think directly in English. With regard to this point, do you have some constructive suggestions to make? Then, my grade of the final exam makes it plain that I am left behind by the majority of my classmates, so would you please give me some advice on English learning so that I can catch up with them next term? Lastly, to make some preparation in advance, I also want to know what is generally covered in your class next term.

I would feel obliged if you can point out a way for my English learning. Looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题本文是篇提纲类作文，材料简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，要点分三部分来写：1、描述英语学习上遇到的困难；2、寻求暑期英语学习的建议；3、询问下学期的学习内容。文章要用一般现在时态和第一人称来写，另外要适当增加细节，还应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的得分档次。

【亮点说明】文中使用了不少高级短语和句子，为文章增色不少，比如I would feel obliged if you can…，impress… with …, enquire of sb. …等句型，定语从句… in the situation where Chinese stands between me and what I want to express...等等; 并注意了句子的衔接如：that is to say, …, To begin with，…Then，… Lastly,… 等等，增强了文章的高级感和紧凑感。