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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I participated in a gymnastic competition last Saturday. My mom or sister went to the stadium to cheer for me. My mom seemed to have sensed my anxious. She comforted me by tell me that I was the best. Besides, she told me to close my eye and take a deep breath. When it was my turn to performing, I entered with a smile and wave to the crowd. I just focused my performance. At the end of the competition, my mom gave me a warmly hug. My sister said it, “You should regard this as a glorious defeat.” Although I didn’t won, I felt proud of myself.

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【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。作者参加体操比赛，妈妈和姐姐去给她加油打气，教她解除紧张的方法，为她感到骄傲，虽然作者没有赢，但她自己也感到自豪。

1．考查连词。文章下文是my mom和 my sister都到了比赛现场，所以是二者同时在，应该用连词and，故将or改为and。

2．考查名词。my为代词所有格，后面用名词，故将anxious改为anxiety。

3．考查非谓语动词。介词by后要跟名词性词语，所以动词就要用动名词，故将tell改为telling。

4．考查名词复数。人的眼睛有两只，要用复数，故将eye改为eyes。

5．考查固定搭配。It was my turn to do sth.轮到我做某事，动词不定式后跟动词原形，故将performing改为perform。

6．考查时态。上周六的体操比赛，进场entered用了一般过去时，所以进场后对观众招手也是发生在过去，要用一般过去时，故将wave改为waved。

7．考查固定短语。focus on固定搭配，意为“集中精力在……”，故focus后加上on。

8．考查形容词。hug为名词，形容词修饰名词，所以要用形容词形式，故将warmly改为warm。

9．考查宾语。谓语动词said后“You should regard this as a glorious defeat.”是宾语从句，是说的内容，所以it多余，故将it删除。

10．考查时态。一般过去时的否定句didn’t后动词要用原形，故将won改为win。