Question

1．某英文网站刊登下面图画，拟举行中学生英文征文比赛．请根据图画内容，并结合自己的生活实际，写一篇120～150词的英语短文参加比赛．要点如下：
1．简要描述图画内容；
2．阐明产生这种现象的原因并发表自己的观点．

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Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文．根据对图片的理解及英语提示写一篇短文．首先描述图片点明主题，分析其含义，最后发表感想．基本时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点部分  as we all know 众所周知；do harm to 对…有害；depend on 依赖，依靠；on one's own 靠某人自己；right now 立刻，马上；keep away from 远离，回避
As is seen from the two pictures，many teenagers in middle school or high school smoke，no matter boys or girls．（高分句型一） 
Now，lots of teenagers like smoking，which has been a big problem that can't be ignored．（高分句型二）
We should protect ourselves from smoking，learn more about the danger of smoking and keep away from people who smoke．（高分句型三）

解答 As is seen from the two pictures，many teenagers in middle school or high school smoke，no matter boys or girls．（高分句型一）There are examples like them around me as well．Now，lots of teenagers like smoking，which has been a big problem that can't be ignored．（高分句型二）Some of them smoke just for fun and some think smoking looks cool．Others smoke because there are many people around them who smoke．
    As we all know，smoking is harmful，especially to students．First of all，smoking is bad for health because it can cause disease．Second，smoking does harm to brains and it can influence studies．Last but not least，smoking costs money．Students generally depend on their parents to live and haven't started to make a living on their own．In this case，some teenagers even steal money so that they can buy cigarettes．
    Smoking is so harmful．Smokers had better give up smoking right away．We should protect ourselves from smoking，learn more about the danger of smoking and keep away from people who smoke．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．