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【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Shortly after when I moved to a new neighborhood, my African gray parrot accidentally fly out of the door. Panicked, I ran after him.One of the new word the parrot had learned recently was coffee, and her nickname was Small. As a result, I was running around yelled “Small! Coffee!” at the trees like a madwoman, hoping for him give a response. Finally, the neighbor cautiously approached me with a steaming cup on hand. She said, “Maybe you should relax. By the way, there has no coffee shop here, honey.” Fortunate, I got my parrot back later that day.

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【解析】Shortly after when I moved to a new neighborhood,此句为after 引导的时间状语从句，when 多余。

my African gray parrot accidentally fly out of the door.根据前后句可知此句时态错误，要用一般过去时，风里语要改为flew。

One of the new word the parrot had learned recently was coffee,此句中one of 后要加名词复数，所以word 要变words。

and her nickname was Small.根据后文可知此处指代鹦鹉用his ，不用her。

I was running around yelled此句中有谓语动词was running，因此yell 为非谓语用现在分词yelling。

hoping for him give a response.此句为hope for sb to do，

the neighbor cautiously approached me with a steaming cup on hand.此句的邻居是第一次提到应该用a。

a neighbor cautiously approached me with a steaming cup on hand.此句杯子在手中用in，不用on。

there has no coffee shop here, honey.此句表示这儿没有咖啡店，某处有。。。用there is no coffee shop。

Fortunate, I got my parrot back later that day.此句幸运的是，我最终找回了我的鹦鹉。幸运的修饰整句话应该用副词fortunately。