Question

假定你是李华，你将去英国伯明翰Iselly Bishop School作一年交换生，请给该校负责此项目的Mr. Clark写一封email,询问以下内容：

1. 宿舍里是否有厨房，是否能够做些简单的中餐；

2. 是否能提前得到课程时间表，还需要做什么准备；

3. 你感兴趣的其他问题。

参考词汇： exchange student 交换生

注意：1. 适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100 字左右。

Dear Mr. Clark,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mr. Clark,

     I’m a senior high student from China who has signed up for your exchange program. I’m writing for your help with some issues regarding my study in your school.

    Firstly, is our dormitory equipped with a kitchen, where we can cook for ourselves once in a while? Secondly, is there any way that I can have the timetable in advance so that I can make full preparations for some courses?            Thirdly, what necessities, besides the ones on the guidebook, should I bring with me and will there be some trips organized during our stay there ?I appreciate your time and help.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：

本文是一篇给出汉语提示的提纲类书信。文章只给出了简单的汉语提示，这需要考生充分发挥自己的想象力，将文章内容流畅地表达出来。成文时应注意以下几点：1.文章内容要齐全；（1）宿舍里是否有厨房，是否能够做些简单的中餐；（2）是否能提前得到课程时间表，还需要做什么准备；（3）你感兴趣的其他问题。2.时态：一般现在时；3.人称：以第一人称；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。6.词数控制在100左右。

【亮点说明】使用了连词和插入语：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly；使用了从句：I’m a senior high student from China who has signed up for your exchange program. Is there any way that I can have the timetable in advance so that I can make full preparations for some courses?高级短语： Looking forward to，make full preparations for，equipped with，signed up for

考点：考查学生语言的运用能力。