Question

最近，你看到某英文报社正在征集主题为“如何才能受人欢迎”的短文，对此你很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法，给该报社投稿。

要点提示：

　　1、衣着干净、整齐，保持微笑

　　2、诚实，乐于助人

3、懂得与人合作

　　4、其他

注意：

　　①词数100左右；②文章的标题和开头已为你写好，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others,  but what is the secret to achieve popularity?  In fact, it is very simple.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieve popularity? In fact, it is very simple. The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly. In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another important step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. It’s also important to put others first. If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us. I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.

【解析】这是篇是开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“如何才能受人欢迎”和内容上的简要提示。结合所给文章的开头确定要写的内容为“如何才能受人欢迎”的具体做法，也就是要点提示的1、2、3、4点；注意要把第4点补充完整。四点内容的衔接可用The first step is…; We should…. Another important step is…. It’s also important to do …;最后注意要有个总结：I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.