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现在，大多数学生选择住校，在寝室里同学之间难免会发生一些小摩擦。上周二晚上十点半，张芳和李琳发生了争吵（张芳开灯学习，疲惫一天的李琳无法入睡）,双方都不肯让步......），你当时在场，努力地让他们冷静下来，告知他们同学之间我们都应该彼此理解。他们意识到错误并重修于好。你觉得同学之间应该要互相理解，要交流并包容才能营造和谐的环境。请用英文写一篇关于这件事的短文。词数：100-120。你的文章应包括下列要点：

1.张方和李华发生争吵；2.你帮助解决他们之间的矛盾；3.你的看法。

注：争吵quarrel  重修于好： make up; 包容： tolerate （开头已给出）

Creating a harmonious（和谐）environment

Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels.____________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Creating a harmonious environment

Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. Last Tuesday Zhang Fang stayed up doing her homework after 10:30pm in the dormitory. Feeling tired, Li Lin went to bed immediately. But she couldn't fall asleep with lights on. She got so angry that she lost her temper and quarreled with Zhang Fang. Neither of them would give in and the quarrel continued.

While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their mistakes and made up finally.

After all, we share the same school and everyone is part of the big family. Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment.

【解析】本文为夹叙夹议型议论文，其结构可安排如下：?引入句：现在，大多数学生选择住校，在寝室里同学之间难免会发生一些小摩擦。（生活现象）?叙述张方和李华发生争吵?你帮助解决他们之间的矛盾④你的看法：同学之间应该要互相理解，要交流并包容才能营造和谐的环境。注意时态，议论部分用一般现在时，叙述事情部分用一般过去时。人称为第一人称和第三人称。

考点：夹叙夹议型议论文

点评：夹叙夹议型议论文文章常用结构：

第一段：引入句，校园生活现象或社会现象，一定要翻译题干;

第二段：叙述自己的经历(亲身经历或周围人的经历)

第三段：(感受)议论+升华