Question

请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：

            1．对该人物的简单介绍；

            2．喜欢该人物的理由；

            3．从该人物身上得到的启示。

 

Thomas Edison	Helen Keller	William Shakespeare
inventor; creative; diligent; full of wisdom	ordinary but great woman; disabled; optimistic; eager to learn	writer; talented; imaginative; man of all ages
“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine perspiration.”	“…if I had the power of sight for three days.”	“Life is a stage…”

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Sample 1: Thomas Edison

Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.

I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.

What impresses me most is his famous saying: “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine perspiration”. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.                         (157 words)

 

 

Sample 2: Helen Keller

Every time I read “… if I had the power of sight for three days”, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman.

I admire Helen because she was optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms Sullivan, Helen learned to read and write and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder!

Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.              (143 words)

 

 

Sample 3: William Shakespeare

Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favourite English writer and the man of all ages!

Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life!

Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone has his own role to play, and I will try my best to play my role well.           (135 words)

 

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于人物传记类短文写作，属于半开放性的作文，对考生的要求较高。要求考生自行组织要点，在进行串联写作。写作时要使用合适的连接词连接起全文，同时注意按照时间顺序来组织全文，使文章更有条理。

考点：考查半开放性作文的写作

点评：本文较为新颖，给的要点很少，而且是以英语的形式出现，对考生的要求较高，属于半开放性的作文，但给考生的余地也较大。可以做适当的发挥，使用高级词汇，短语，句型，最主要使用合适的连接词来理解全文，使之成为整体。